Underground

2 comments

We all have our roles to play, and once in a while a streak of kindness, or even nobility, shines through. (MP3)
We all have our roles to play, and once in a while a streak of kindness, or even nobility, shines through. (MP3)
Content tags (find similar stories): character | contemporary | MP3 | New York

Thank you! Credit card receipts will be under the name Timbre Productions, my electronic music composition site. Although I feel like a charity, I’m not, so donations are not tax deductable.

MP3 Player — To listen to this story (streaming), click the play button on the player bar at the bottom of the story frame. To download the MP3, right-click the player bar (or Control-Click on Mac).

PDF Download

For a PDF of this manuscript, please make your request in a comment (below) and I will email it to you as soon as I can. Thanks for reading my work — Allen

About Comments

When you submit your first comment, you will be asked to enter your email to create an “account.” This first comment will then be eyeballed by a human being, to prevent spam. Once your email is on file, approval for future comments won’t be required.

All comments are welcome, but only the most interesting ones are likely to be posted. Comments that aren’t posted are still cherished and fill us with long-lasting gratitude.

2 Comments

  1. Allen Cobb

    Thank you so much for your kind words! I, too, find this one rather touching. Tough cop, not appreciated, still secretly shows simple act of kindness.

    Reply
  2. Elaine Duncan

    Because of the beautifully written descriptions of the New York subway at night I could feel the cold, the stifling air, and the persistent loneliness of that environment. For me the two characters were well developed and contrasted in their differences which added poignancy to the subtle shifts in their brief relationship. This one touched my heart. Thank you.

    Reply

Submit a Comment

Your email address will not be published.

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.